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Drabble: Old Wounds (Sun) 
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7th-Apr-2007 07:50 pm
btvs → big damn hero, kate → everything changes, spn → idk my bff lauren?, d/l → little boy and little girl, bela → end of the line, fnl → julie and tyra, j2 → lesbian gay type lovers, juliet → the other woman, spn → on the dark side of the moon, fnl → the girls, vm → girl from mars, mm → wear your past, oth → true love never fades, mm → happy and carefree, mm → party girl, sandy → teh padalaugh, sun → i am strong, d/l → all the things i should have done, js → i couldn't keep you safe, sandy → lady in red, stock → shoes!, dean → ...you're the shortbus, spn → gay love saves the day, d/l → the trio, jy → there is only you, d/l → their love is so pure, d/l → i forgot to tell you i love you, bela → bela hates you too, d/l → sam is the best brother ever, sawyer → smile, sam → brain go splody, stock → ilu!, sandy → idk my bff jared?, d/l → the hint of a spark, yjk → shiny happy people, pd → charlotte charles, sun → i won't be lost, btvs → he's my everything, spn → sid and nancy, d/l → and never let you go, oth → peyton sawyer, dean → okay now i'm depressed, d/l → take care, dean → dean smile, sandy → all smiles, sun → i love you, dean → broken nail, l → omg bounce and squee!, d/l → layla has come for the sex, dean → f*ck off, s/j → married to a rockstar, s/j → jared and sandy, l → a friend's love, fnl → matt and julie, sun → i heart sun, dean → don't objectify me, d/l → i'm with you, oth → best friends forever, mm → beach girl, juliet → i am strong, pd → i'll be your best friend, sawyer → wtf?!, l → oh you're my best friend, s/j → jared hearts sandy, sandy → sandy says omg!, sawyer → hero of the moment, sawyer → i'll look after you, oth → brooke davis, kane → this is my kane icon, js → i heart jack/sawyer, d/l → i'll watch over you, l → we stand together, btvs → still, d/l → i want you by my side, d/l → at first sight, d/l → i believed in us, sam → cutie pie, d/l → i'd give up forever, d/l → we never had the chance, quotes → classy and fabulous, fnl → julie taylor, sawyer → having a blonde moment, vd → logan is a poo face, pd → my one and only, sun → until it burns you numb, sun → do we have to fuck you up?, stock → little miss sunshine, kane → this is my steve icon, spn → the brothers winchester, spn → extreme glomp, sun → taking care of business, vd → real love stories, jk → you could mean everything to me, oth → my not-so-secret shame, spn → 'cause we're so awesome, sun → glomp!, mm → sparkly things!, js → coming undone, d/l → closer, claire → little sister, j/j → we're in this together, oth → b. davis and p. sawyer, fnl → i choose you, sawyer → what's in a name?
Title: Old Wounds
Rating: PG
Summary: It starts as a sharp pain in the center of her chest and spreads quickly through her veins. It robs her of her ability to speak, the cold fury that makes her ball up her fist and stare at him with disdain and rage.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: Told you I was going to be prolific. I'm borderline spamming now. ;D For [info]lostsquee drabble challenge, prompt #2: sharp. I'm also counting this as my entry for [info]psych_30, prompt #11: castration anxiety.



It starts as a sharp pain right in the center of her chest and spreads quickly through her veins. It robs her of her ability to speak, this cold fury that makes her ball up her fist and stare at him with disdain and rage.

The pain in her head, the ache in her limbs, have long since healed, and the fear she had once lived in eased just a little more every day. This pain is no better, no worse, than the attack itself, but it's a different kind of pain, the pain that accompanies the betrayal of a friend. It's a kind of pain she doesn’t believe will be healing any day soon.

His confession means something, however little, but she can no longer look at him, no longer hold back her bitter, angry tears. So she storms off, leaving him still apologizing.
Comments 
8th-Apr-2007 09:15 am (UTC)
[info]jenthegypsy
I woke up at 4:30 this morning with the ending line of a Sun drabble for "sharp" and sketched it out quickly before browsing my f'list. Turns out, it is very similar to yours, but with a slightly different angle, so I'm going to polish it later and post it anyway. I hope you will like it.


Your drabble cut me to the core. It is very powerful, very well done. I hope it will begin the healing process in your heart. *&hearts and tight hugs*
8th-Apr-2007 05:50 pm (UTC)
[info]isis2015
I woke up at 4:30 this morning with the ending line of a Sun drabble for "sharp" and sketched it out quickly before browsing my f'list. Turns out, it is very similar to yours, but with a slightly different angle, so I'm going to polish it later and post it anyway. I hope you will like it.

Oh, that's so cool. I'm looking forward to reading it. :D

Your drabble cut me to the core. It is very powerful, very well done. I hope it will begin the healing process in your heart. *&hearts and tight hugs*

Aw, thank you so much hun. I'm so glad you liked it so much. ♥ *hugs*
8th-Apr-2007 07:43 pm (UTC)
[info]gottalovev
a wonderful use of the prompt. you really nail Sun, every time :)
8th-Apr-2007 09:28 pm (UTC)
[info]isis2015
Aw, well thank you. :) I try.
8th-Apr-2007 10:09 pm (UTC)
[info]inthekeyofd
YES!! You wrote Sun not accepting that apology!! Thank you for that..I love LOVE Sawyer, but honestly, he deserves this cold shoulder from Sun, he does.
8th-Apr-2007 10:15 pm (UTC)
[info]isis2015
It's actually supposed to be Charlie. But don't you worry, I've got something bigger coming for Sawyer. That's actually going to be one of my [info]psych_30 pieces and it's gonna be a little more involved than this.
8th-Apr-2007 10:22 pm (UTC)
[info]inthekeyofd
Please don't hate me, I had three hours of sleep..and the "confession" part..I should have known...*slaps forehead*
8th-Apr-2007 10:28 pm (UTC)
[info]isis2015
I could never hate you! If anything, I was way to vague. And I know what a lack of sleep does to you. I went through a whole school day on four hours of sleep. Unpleasant.
9th-Apr-2007 01:58 am (UTC)
[info]themoononastick
Oh, this is just lovely, a perfect insight into Sun's thoughts in that scene. Wonderful. :)
9th-Apr-2007 02:00 am (UTC)
[info]isis2015
Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it. ♥
10th-Apr-2007 07:57 pm (UTC)
[info]gemjam
Ouch. This hurts. You did a really great job of getting in her head in this moment. The description here is just wonderful, I could really feel it with her. Great job, hon :)
10th-Apr-2007 08:08 pm (UTC)
[info]isis2015
Aw, thanks sweetie. I have a couple of stories I'm planning where I'm going to dig deeper into Sun's feels upon learning what was really done to her, with regard to both Charlie and Sawyer. I'm this close to finishing my [info]psych_30 claim, so that should help. :)

Thanks for reading, and for commenting. I'm glad you liked it. ♥
16th-Apr-2007 04:27 pm (UTC)
[info]uhzoomzip
nicely done, girlie. i like angry sun. we need to see more of her on the show! and charlie deserved a slap, too, imho.
16th-Apr-2007 05:33 pm (UTC)
[info]isis2015
Yeah, he probably did. But I'm guessing that he didn't get one because he was the one that actually confessed what he did. Or maybe she was just to pissed off to have the presence of mind to hit him.

Thanks you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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