17 December 2006 @ 04:51 pm
Fic: Stuck (Shannon, Boone)  
Title: Stuck
Rating: PG
Summary: She stomps around in a circle, staring at the dark, rainy jungle and wondering what the hell is going on. She catches sight of the blood on her shirt, the shirt she had been wearing on her date with Sayid. The shirt she had been wearing that day that Boone died and for three days after.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: For [info]hiatus_stories, prompt #123: Boone and Shannon, as ghosts on the island.



“What the hell!” Shannon is standing by a tree as rain falls all around her but never hits her. She stomps around in a circle, staring at the dark, rainy jungle and wondering what the hell is going on. She catches sight of the blood on her shirt, the shirt she had been wearing on her date with Sayid. The shirt she had been wearing that day that Boone died and for three days after.

“Oh, that’s just great,” she complains. “That’ll never come out.”

With a huff and a sigh she lifts her head. Her jaw drops at the sight in front of her. Sayid is holding her body in his arms while a rather shell shocked woman points a gun at him. It doesn’t take much after that for her to put two and two together, and she slumps and sighs and says, “Well…shit.”

Sayid looks angry, angrier than she’s ever seen him (and, come to think of it, she’s never seen him lose his cool over anything, so she’s slightly gratified by the fact that when he does, it’s because of her) and when he lunges at the woman, Shannon screams his name.

“Sayid! Sayid, stop, are you trying to get yourself killed?!” She is vaguely aware that Jin and Michael were shouting Sayid’s name too, and that Sawyer probably would be too where he not laying unconscious on the ground. Shannon wonders if she shot him too, because that oozing mess on his shoulder looks suspiciously like the oozing mess on her stomach.

“Sayid!” She yells at him again but he isn’t listening.

“He can’t hear you.”

She whips around more quickly that seems possible and sees Boone leaning against a tree, smirking like the know-it-all smart ass he thinks he is.

“Oh shut up,” she snaps, turning and resuming trying to get Sayid’s attention before the largest man that Shannon has ever seen knocks him unconscious. “Sayid!”

“You can scream until you’re hoarse, Princess, but it’s never going to do any good,” Boone repeats himself.

Shannon turns, slowly, regarding everything around her as if it had somehow become unfamiliar in the past few minutes. “Where are we?”

He shrugs. “Same place we’ve always been. Just a different part of it. I think.”

“Well what the hell’s going on?” She demands. “Why can’t they hear us.”

He gives her a sideways smile and shakes his head. “We’re dead Shan.”

“I’m what?!”

“You didn’t think you were going to survive that, did you?” He gestures to her stomach and she covers is self-consciously. She’s slightly amazed by the fact that it doesn’t hurt. It doesn’t feel like anything at all, really.

“So, what, we’re stuck here?” she asks, indignantly.

“Unless someone does a whole bunch of drugs or something, yeah, pretty much.”

Shannon frowns. “Then what?”

“Then what what?” Boone asks.

“What if someone does a whole bunch of drugs, then what?”

“Then they can see us. I think. It’s a theory, at least. I haven’t been able to test it yet.” He shrugs and walks back and forth, like this is nothing, like he’s so used to it that it’s not a bug huge deal. Which it probably isn’t for him, by now, but that doesn’t men it annoys Shannon any less.

“So…this is it? No pearly gates, no choirs of freaking angels, just…this?”

“Hell if I know Shannon.”

“Well, you’ve been her longer!”

“Doesn’t mean I know more than you know.”

“Well, duh.”

“Nice Shan. Real nice.”

“What do you want from me? I just died. Aren’t I allowed to be pissed off?”

“Sure, just direct it where it belongs!”

“I would, but she can’t hear me!” Shannon shouts into thin air, at a woman who can’t hear her, but she doesn’t really care.

“I don’t think she meant to,” Boone says.

“Who cares? What kinda moron fires blindly into the jungle.”

“A scared moron.”

“Oh yeah, I’m so terrifying.”

“Not of you dumbass!”

“Double dumbass!”

“Double dumbass? What are you, twelve?”

“Well, at this point, it’s looking like I’m never going to be twenty two.”

“Yeah. Sorry about that.”

Shannon sighs and shrugs and kicks at the dirt. “You were right. Death does suck.”

He nods. “Yeah.”

After a while Shannon crosses her arms over her chest and says, “You left me.”

Boone sighs back. “I didn’t mean to.”

“Don’t do it again?”

“Not really an issue anymore. You’re stuck with me Princess.”

“Goody,” Shannon says listlessly, but she can’t manage not to smile as well.
 
 
Current Mood: cold
Current Music: What Am I To You - Norah Jones
 
 
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Fan of the Jack show.[info]xunderstatedx on December 18th, 2006 12:05 am (UTC)
OMG so good. I love Shannon and Boone interaction. This is so nice; loved the description of her shirt and Sayid holding her.

and your banner is loveeeeee
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 12:07 am (UTC)
Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you liked it and my banner.
jenthegypsy: bear huggles by lj user bitsy_icons[info]jenthegypsy on December 18th, 2006 12:23 am (UTC)
Oh, most excellent! Perfect voices throughout, and what a great take on how longer-dead Boone and newly-dead Shannon would react to each other and to the situation. Just perfect, darlin', and a pleasure to read.
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 12:25 am (UTC)
Ah, thank you so much. That's so nice of you to say. I don't write Boone that much, so getting his voice right was really important to me. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks so much for reading. :)
the good kind of pointless: shan[info]cmonkatiekatie on December 18th, 2006 02:53 am (UTC)
Oh, this is so great! Kinda sad, but not too overwhelmingly, and it's all ridiculously in character. The whole exchange between them is perfect, but I liked this bit best:

“Unless someone does a whole bunch of drugs or something, yeah, pretty much.”

Shannon frowns. “Then what?”

“Then what what?” Boone asks.

Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 02:58 am (UTC)
Hee, thanks. :) It's kinda bittersweet, because they are dead, after all, but I'm hoping that it was light enough to overcome the small melancholy.

I don't think I've ever written Boone before, so getting his voice right was very important to me. I'm glad you thought they were both in character, and thanks so much for reading. :D
the story girl: Lost: shannon[info]eponine119 on December 18th, 2006 04:27 am (UTC)
This is great. I love Shannon in this, so bratty and yet at the same time a little bit vulnerable, asking Boone not to leave her. You did a great job with the dialogue, perfectly capturing that brother-sister banter.
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 04:50 am (UTC)
:D I'm so glad you liked it. I tried to write Boone as best as I could, seeing as I either never have before or have only done once, so I'm very glad you liked the dialogue and thought that it worked. Shannon and Boone, I found, are interesting to play off of each other because they have that bratty relationship, but underneath it, they really do care about her (only, Boone in a different kind of way).
klungito: XF - 5x10 Emily[info]klungito on December 18th, 2006 08:43 am (UTC)
It is interesting to see Shannon addressing her own death and the banter vetween Boone and her was quite natural and helped put a light touch to this fic. thank you very much!)
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 05:58 pm (UTC)
Aw, thank you. :) I'm so glad you liked it.
Sat and forever am at work here.: maggie closeup [L][info]hkath on December 18th, 2006 09:23 am (UTC)
I adore the Shannon and Boone bickering and love! Miss them so much!! Nice job :)
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 05:58 pm (UTC)
Thank you! :D I miss them too.
Laura: SHANNON[info]elise_509 on December 18th, 2006 05:04 pm (UTC)
She whips around more quickly that seems possible and sees Boone leaning against a tree, smirking like the know-it-all smart ass he thinks he is.

Oh, Boone and Shannon. I love that their relationship has continued on as it used to be in the afterlife, annoyance and bitterness that is underlined with real love. I loved the last bit when Shannon asks Boone not to leave her again. It's so very Shannon, being irked and bothered by him but in the end realizing she is really grateful for him. :)

*loves*
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 05:57 pm (UTC)
:) I think that Shannon and Boone had a very interesting relationship, very much brother and sister. They were always very annoyed by each other but they really did love each other. I'm so glad you think that came across, and thank you so much for reading.
hendercats: desmond peering by grrliz[info]hendercats on December 18th, 2006 11:12 pm (UTC)
"Double dumbass? What are you, twelve?"
*snerk* You have such an excellent handle on both their voices - I can hear them so clearly. Beautifully done! Oh, and excellent choice of moment for your setting.
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 18th, 2006 11:18 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. Boone is unfamiliar territory for me, so I'm very glad that you enjoyed it and thought that the voices were right for the characters. :)
Allison[info]queen_alysanne on December 20th, 2006 04:04 am (UTC)
I love this. It's so beliveably them as well.

Plus I've been craving a good Boone/Shannon fic for awhile(which with the whole the charicters are dead thing)are increaseingly hard to find
Amanda: Shannon ♥ because of you[info]isis2015 on December 20th, 2006 04:09 am (UTC)
Aw, well thank you so much! :D I'm glad you liked it.