Fic: Noise (Sun-centric) 
15th-Aug-2006 07:15 pm
btvs → big damn hero, kate → everything changes, spn → idk my bff lauren?, d/l → little boy and little girl, bela → end of the line, fnl → julie and tyra, j2 → lesbian gay type lovers, juliet → the other woman, spn → on the dark side of the moon, fnl → the girls, vm → girl from mars, mm → wear your past, oth → true love never fades, mm → happy and carefree, mm → party girl, sandy → teh padalaugh, sun → i am strong, d/l → all the things i should have done, js → i couldn't keep you safe, sandy → lady in red, stock → shoes!, dean → ...you're the shortbus, spn → gay love saves the day, d/l → the trio, jy → there is only you, d/l → their love is so pure, d/l → i forgot to tell you i love you, bela → bela hates you too, d/l → sam is the best brother ever, sawyer → smile, sam → brain go splody, stock → ilu!, sandy → idk my bff jared?, d/l → the hint of a spark, yjk → shiny happy people, pd → charlotte charles, sun → i won't be lost, btvs → he's my everything, spn → sid and nancy, d/l → and never let you go, oth → peyton sawyer, dean → okay now i'm depressed, d/l → take care, dean → dean smile, sandy → all smiles, sun → i love you, dean → broken nail, l → omg bounce and squee!, d/l → layla has come for the sex, dean → f*ck off, s/j → married to a rockstar, s/j → jared and sandy, l → a friend's love, fnl → matt and julie, sun → i heart sun, dean → don't objectify me, d/l → i'm with you, oth → best friends forever, mm → beach girl, juliet → i am strong, pd → i'll be your best friend, sawyer → wtf?!, l → oh you're my best friend, s/j → jared hearts sandy, sandy → sandy says omg!, sawyer → hero of the moment, sawyer → i'll look after you, oth → brooke davis, kane → this is my kane icon, js → i heart jack/sawyer, d/l → i'll watch over you, l → we stand together, btvs → still, d/l → i want you by my side, d/l → at first sight, d/l → i believed in us, sam → cutie pie, d/l → i'd give up forever, d/l → we never had the chance, quotes → classy and fabulous, fnl → julie taylor, sawyer → having a blonde moment, vd → logan is a poo face, pd → my one and only, sun → until it burns you numb, sun → do we have to fuck you up?, stock → little miss sunshine, kane → this is my steve icon, spn → the brothers winchester, spn → extreme glomp, sun → taking care of business, vd → real love stories, jk → you could mean everything to me, oth → my not-so-secret shame, spn → 'cause we're so awesome, sun → glomp!, mm → sparkly things!, js → coming undone, d/l → closer, claire → little sister, j/j → we're in this together, oth → b. davis and p. sawyer, fnl → i choose you, sawyer → what's in a name?
Title: Noise
Rating: PG
Summery: The first thing she’s aware of is noise. Her vision is fuzzy as she opens her eyes. Her head aches like nothing she has ever felt before. She tries to focus on something, anything, as her vision corrects itself.
Disclaimer: I do not own Lost. At all. I wish but alas...
Author's Note: I really, really need to get on top of my [info]psych_30 claim. But I'm almost half way done, so yay on that. :D This was written for prompt #17: group think.



Noise.

The first thing she’s aware of is noise. Her vision is fuzzy as she opens her eyes. Her head aches like nothing she has ever felt before. She tries to focus on something, anything, as her vision corrects itself. She’s on the beach now, in a tent, laying on a mat and covered by a blanket.

She turns her gaze to the beach where she sees clusters of people sitting in one place or another – against trees, by campfires, inside tents – and they all seem to be talking all at once. She can’t hear their conversations from where she lays. They all blend into a dull hum. But she doesn’t have to hear them to know they’re talking about her.

“Sun?”

She turns her head too quickly to the left, painfully tugging at an aching muscle. She grunts, but manages to smile at Claire, who has come to a kneeling position beside her with Aaron in her arms.

“How are you?” she asks.

Sun takes a short look around her. She doesn’t know how she is. More then anything else, she’s confused. Who had done this to her? Why? The throbbing in her head made if difficult to focus on anything else, but she did say, “Sore.”

“I’ll get Jack,” Claire says, rising carefully to her feet and taking off down the beach.

She rises to a sitting position and her muscles object strongly. The stinging on her forehead tells her there’s a cut there. She quickly checks her body for other cuts or bruises, looking up as a shadow covers her and she sees Jack.

He asks about her condition and she tells him that her pain is minimal. It isn’t exactly the truth, but she figures that she’s worried enough people already. Her injuries are nothing that she can’t survive without everyone worrying about her and forcing her to stay laying down in that tend for days on end.

“Do you remember anything?” he asks next. She tells him all that she remembers: Vincent, the rain, and the attack. She remembers it in flashes, and the memories don’t seem to fit together. But she knows that is what happened. And it made no sense. He asks her how many there were, and she tells him she didn’t see. It had all happened in a second. She hadn’t known what was happening until it was already over, and by then she had all but lost consciousness.

Jin turns to her and asks her a question sharply. She responds as best she can. His concern is evident so she tries to underplay the situation, tell him that she is okay, that everything is alright now, but he only gets angrier.

“Gun,” Jin says, and her eyes go a little bit wide.

Panic.

Jin repeats himself two more times and Jack insists that he calm down. But Jin won’t let it go and eventually Jack caves and they leave for the hatch. Sun’s heart sinks as she settles back into the tent. This was the last thing that she wanted. Everyone was going out of their minds, following each other, and none of them knew what they were doing. They thought that guns were the one and only solution to everything, when all they had brought them up until now was grief.

She has seen what Jin is capable of if put under certain circumstances. And Jack was following him now, taking him down into the hatch, and arming him. And that was the most terrifying part of all of this.
Comments 
18th-Aug-2006 03:04 am (UTC)
Oooh, another insight-ful fic from you. The violence in Jin -- which got diluted this past season, so now it's more the violence Sun thinks is in Jin, but isn't -- it's great to see that make a comeback with regard to the guns, and the attack on her.
18th-Aug-2006 03:10 am (UTC)
I think that Jin changed significantly from being the violent man that he used to be, but I think that Sun being attacked like she was could be enough to drive him back there a bit. Or at least for Sun to think he's going to.

:) I'm glad you liked it. I kinda wanted to explore her perspective on what happened because you didn't really get to see too much of that in the episode.
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