Fic: The Moment (Hurley/Libby) 
8th-Mar-2006 07:59 pm
btvs → big damn hero, kate → everything changes, spn → idk my bff lauren?, d/l → little boy and little girl, bela → end of the line, fnl → julie and tyra, j2 → lesbian gay type lovers, juliet → the other woman, spn → on the dark side of the moon, fnl → the girls, vm → girl from mars, mm → wear your past, oth → true love never fades, mm → happy and carefree, mm → party girl, sandy → teh padalaugh, sun → i am strong, d/l → all the things i should have done, js → i couldn't keep you safe, sandy → lady in red, stock → shoes!, dean → ...you're the shortbus, spn → gay love saves the day, d/l → the trio, jy → there is only you, d/l → their love is so pure, d/l → i forgot to tell you i love you, bela → bela hates you too, d/l → sam is the best brother ever, sawyer → smile, sam → brain go splody, stock → ilu!, sandy → idk my bff jared?, d/l → the hint of a spark, yjk → shiny happy people, pd → charlotte charles, sun → i won't be lost, btvs → he's my everything, spn → sid and nancy, d/l → and never let you go, oth → peyton sawyer, dean → okay now i'm depressed, d/l → take care, dean → dean smile, sandy → all smiles, sun → i love you, dean → broken nail, l → omg bounce and squee!, d/l → layla has come for the sex, dean → f*ck off, s/j → married to a rockstar, s/j → jared and sandy, l → a friend's love, fnl → matt and julie, sun → i heart sun, dean → don't objectify me, d/l → i'm with you, oth → best friends forever, mm → beach girl, juliet → i am strong, pd → i'll be your best friend, sawyer → wtf?!, l → oh you're my best friend, s/j → jared hearts sandy, sandy → sandy says omg!, sawyer → hero of the moment, sawyer → i'll look after you, oth → brooke davis, kane → this is my kane icon, js → i heart jack/sawyer, d/l → i'll watch over you, l → we stand together, btvs → still, d/l → i want you by my side, d/l → at first sight, d/l → i believed in us, sam → cutie pie, d/l → i'd give up forever, d/l → we never had the chance, quotes → classy and fabulous, fnl → julie taylor, sawyer → having a blonde moment, vd → logan is a poo face, pd → my one and only, sun → until it burns you numb, sun → do we have to fuck you up?, stock → little miss sunshine, kane → this is my steve icon, spn → the brothers winchester, spn → extreme glomp, sun → taking care of business, vd → real love stories, jk → you could mean everything to me, oth → my not-so-secret shame, spn → 'cause we're so awesome, sun → glomp!, mm → sparkly things!, js → coming undone, d/l → closer, claire → little sister, j/j → we're in this together, oth → b. davis and p. sawyer, fnl → i choose you, sawyer → what's in a name?
Title: The Moment
Rating: PG
Pairing: Hurley/Libby
Warning: I suppose there is a tiny spoiler for “Maternity Leave”. But only if you squint at it.



He looks at her. He can’t help it. He tries not to be obvious about it, ‘cause she’d probably think he was some kind of island stalker or something.

But there she is, standing up the beach, giving Vincent a bath, and he…just can’t help himself.

She turns her head, even slightly, and he looks away. She turns attention back to the dog, and Hurley turns back. Yep, he thinks. Island stalker. That’s just what I am.

So he has a choice to make. He can sit here on the beach, under a tree, and wait for the perfect moment that he’ll never take because he’s too afraid. He can watch perfect moment after perfect moment pass him buy, or he can get up and just talk to her.

Easier said than done dude, he tells himself.

He looks at her again, and he feels that familiar sensation…the one he can’t figure out, the one he gets every time he looks at her and she doesn’t know it. Island stalker.

He has no choice, and before he knows it, he’s pulling himself up out of the sand and walking toward her. She looks up. She smiles. Vincent barks and Hurley pats him on the head.

“Hey Libby.” He says personably, in a way that wouldn’t make her think he’d been sitting across the beach for ten minutes, watching her.

“Hey Hurley.” She replies. The dog barks again, and she laughs and brushes her hand over his fur. He really seems to like it. Hurley can’t quite blame him.

“He really likes you.” Hurley ventures. “You have pets? You know…back home.”

She nods. “Sure.” She says. “Who doesn’t?”

They joke harmlessly for a few minutes. She laughs. He laughs. And because it’s her, because it’s Libby, it doesn’t feel quite like any conversation he’s ever had before. He could make jokes from sun up until sun down –it was kind of his thing—but with her…things felt different. They felt more…meaningful.

This was it. He could feel it. The perfect moment he’d been waiting for. The moment he could tell her…something.

“Hey.”

Hurley is jerked out of his thoughts. Claire and Kate are coming down the beach. Claire is carrying Aaron with him and neither woman looks very happy at all. Damn it.

“Hey you guys.” He manages to say, even though he wishes the two of them were anywhere but here. No offense to Claire or Kate, but…there was just a moment there. He had a feeling they were going to rain on his parade.

“So, you’re a shrink right?” Claire says it like it’s an accusation. Yep, parade officially rained on.

Double damn it.
Comments 
9th-Mar-2006 05:58 am (UTC)
ARGH! Stupid Claire and Kate ruining everything!

Very nice, babe, especially your Hurley POV, his internal voice is spot-on. LOVE!
9th-Mar-2006 10:50 am (UTC)
Thanks hun. :) You really have no idea how much that means coming from you. Hurley's really fun to write.

LOVE!
9th-Mar-2006 12:54 pm (UTC)
I LOVE writing Hurley!

I would have pimped but you have it locked. Are you keeping it a secret?

Because, really, I think lots of people might like it.
9th-Mar-2006 01:32 pm (UTC)
Actually, I wrote it for a challenge at [info]lostfichallange, so it's unlocked over there. I wasn't sure about the rules about posting it to other communities, so I decided to play it on the safe side, see what my flist thinks, then maybe do it later.

But you can go ahead and pimp it there. Here's the link: http://community.livejournal.com/lostfichallenge/70863.html#cutid1

:D
23rd-Mar-2006 07:39 pm (UTC)
Poor Hurley! This is such a normal human dilemma. It's nice to see that on the island. I can really see this on the show.

I like Hurley's voice here. You should write more from his POV.
23rd-Mar-2006 07:45 pm (UTC)
Well thank you very much. This was really fun to write. I love writing Hurley, and Libby is fastly becoming fascinating to me. Plus, Hurley needs some love, so...I couldn't not. :)
6th-Apr-2006 01:15 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reccing this! I wasn't "feeling" the Libby/Hurley before, but after last night I'm sort of getting into it. So this was the perfect fic for me to read today. I love how vulnerable and unsure of himself he is, and how accessible she is. Exactly how they played them in canon last night. You did a really, really good job! *smooch*

*using the only Hurley icon I own*
6th-Apr-2006 02:35 pm (UTC)
Thanks hun. :) I'm really into Hurley/Libby now. I need the cute right about now. I'm really glad you liked it.
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